need help on this song plz comment

[Fofanna15]

these are some of the lyrics,
i can be as loud and free as i want to be, and nothins gonna stop me

[FD1]

Hey,

What are you wanting help with?

Take Care

FD

[Fofanna15]

with more lyrics

[FD1]

Hey man,

I will help ,

Take care
FD

[Fofanna15]

Hey man,

I will help ,

Take care
FD

do you have any ideas??

[FD1]

Well, what genre you thinking? rap, hip hop, pop etc?

what are you wanting to write about? love, hate, guns, drugs etc?

Take Care
FD

[Fofanna15]

idk mabye like pop and the theme would be about being free

[FD1]

Ok, you yourself, sit down and think, think about what its like to be free, or wanting to be free, think about what it means to be free, and why you want to be free, think about what it will take to be free and even what you will give to be free.

Then start jotting your ideas down, eventually you should have a list, after that, you gotta try word it correctly, using words that sound good, that are easy to understand.
once you've got that down and you have lines written, work on your structure and how you wish your written lyrics are structured.

once you get use to writing lyrics, as you do it more and more often, you want need to sit down and think about all the stuff above, cuz you should just be able to do it automatically and then write down the song in the structure of your song without having to waste time trying

Hope this helps.

FD

[Fofanna15]

yea and thanks for your help

[izrafeli]

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