Battle me

[FD1]

LMAO! i'm sorry man, you actually put a disclaimer on your rap LMAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



you want tips? seriously?

What you want tips on?

How to improve, or just rap in general?


FD

[Frosty The FlowMan]

Just tips on improvement, already know, wordplay, puns, and punches.

[Joe Flow]

Frosty, impressive for a 14 year old. I guess my advice to you is make your lines a little longer, use more multi syllable rhymes and less filler lines like the "love is all you need" stuff. FD1, you are decent for this forum, and thats not saying much at all. But saying you are the best? no. The judge sucks by the way he didnt have one decent line. seriously FD1, even you would beat him idk why you think hes good. "like a wood pecker without wood, your a beggar" ~The Judge. haha SO BAD.

[Frosty The FlowMan]

You better think before you speak
Cause when you spit, your shit is weak
Yes I'm the shit, but I don't stink
You're on thin ice when you're in the rink
I don't think twice, bitch I dont think
I won't close my eyes, no I won't blink
I won't wince once, not even wink
Fuck writing lyrics, I spit the ink
My flow is like water, bitch take a drink
Luke I'm your father, the force is with me
This game is a slaughter, now these faggots got beef
I just own the show, boy, I just bag it and leave
I bust, drop, and flow, and I hint jealousy
I hear voices in my head, and they're yelling at me
Solutions piled up, yet im not problem free
Bitch I'm a monster, to you goblins and beats
I took control, so you call the police
But faggot, this is skill, not robbery
It's just go, go, go, like what could stop me
I take a look inside, like I'm window shopping
And you're stepping in the sick shit Im dropping
I am invincible, no there ain't no stopping
So I don't stop, but i drop and roll
I use up my pens, but bitch I don't bowl
Lord I have sinned, please forgive my soul
Only time I pray, is "See You At The Pole"
The physical pain of this shit, Nothing to the emotional toll
On the face of the world, Ima leave my mark like a mole
A scar, or a blemish, just as long as I'm known

[Joe Flow]

didnt really sound like a battle verse, but great for a song. I liked "yes I'm the shit, but i don't stink, you're on thin ice when you're in the rink". keep it up frosty

[Frosty The FlowMan]

Alright man, thanks.

[Lyric Assasin]

Alright man, thanks.

Anyone Wuna Flow Rite Quick

[Lotto]

ayo solomon you me battle you picj judge from LOTTO

[Lotto]

Hah Solomon Omar? You sound like a terrorist
If you think you’re blowin up, you need a fuckin therapist
I could take care of this with a pair of fists
But I still fuck you up when I sit in my chair and diss
You’re a tool and you aint the sharpest one in the shed
The only hood you ever been in is the one on your head
While you act like B-Rabbit
“Aight look:” That’s another Shady habit
You make it simple to diss you like your rap name was Faggot
You’re a bitch dude, claimin you’re a beast in reality
Now I gotta fuck with you like I’m into bestiality
Your rhymes are basic, you aint sick, can’t see it? Get Lasik
I win judges over and close the case quick when I prosecute
Your stomping ground is a curb cuz you’re a gay prostitute
Catch a pimp smack Ima make this wimp crack
You talk, but try and walk the walk, I’ll make you limp back
You must have enjoyed bein unemployed and hood rich
You got a ton of time to wait to get destroyed like a good bitch

i say you beat solomonomar